Post by Naruto on Oct 21, 2006 11:12:09 GMT -5
* i jsut made this Char. for Broken Shinobi and i decided ill use it here to*
Name: Zaki Kariukage
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Village: Village Hidden in Sound/ Transfrered to Leaf
Rank: Chunnin
Clan: Oroborous
Clothing or Armor: Zaki is cursed and blessed with his bloodline, and has realized its potential and flaws. Zaki is vested in a black cloak that shrouds him from the world that hates him for his unique talent. Under this cloak lies a small obsidian chest plate, it has two black straps connection the Armour to him.
He also black muscle shirt below that, this Armour is made of lightened aluminum allowing the maximum amount of defense with the least amount of weight. Zaki knows off his weakness and is determined to make it a strength like his father before him. So he laced two adamant weights to his wrists and his legs, this amount of strain would cause anyone to collapse. Zaki wears a pair of baggy black pants with several pockets, were he lined with holster material making his pockets into intend holders for his weapons and scrolls.
Besides his basic clothing, he wears a another set of Armour above his lightened Armour, this Armour is made of harnded steel alloy, allowing more defense again with lighter weight, he has two gauntlets that are laced with hide of the wolves on the Great Marchuki Moutain, his Gauntlets have seals placed upon them for they were once owned by a master swordsmen. He has this set of Armour covering his knees and feet as well.
Physical Appearance: Zaki has white hair, as white as a ghost, its , it stands tall and spiked into the air. His hair is held back by a a bandage headband and then by his headband that is scared fro training roughly.
Zaki has white eyes, and for what reason, no one knows, hes not blind, his eyes have always added to his frightful dark presence he emits. He has no pupils it just a mass of white similar to those who are using the Byuugan.
Zaki stands at 5 foot 4 inches and weighing in at 115 pounds. He looks like a child, most people think hes at least two years younger than he says he is, this is only but a mere annoyance to Zaki.
Zaki physical outlook doesn't fit his smart personality well, but in all his smaller body has helped him in fight and dodge his opponents attacks. Everything is how it is for a reason good or bad.
Personality: Zaki is the most stoic and timid of all of the last of the Clan Members. Zaki is a smart young man with a dark attitude. Hes not your average brooding loner, hes more or less the Brooding Avenger, with a ploy of a Satisfied Solider.
Near Orichmaru he shows that he wants blood to be spilled of everyone who opposes his kage, but in truth he wants only to spill the blood of the kage, but to do this he must wait till the time is right. His view upon th Sound Nation is skewed and scorn, since of the hatred he received as a child bearing the blood of the clan.
His hatred mainly lies in the Sound Village leader, he can forgive the villages believing the lies he told them. He looks upon the world in two views, Revenge and Knowledge.
When not acting in front of the Kage, he acts more or less like a normal human being, he always has his face in a book or is training, hes more gentle and calm around others then his blood-lusting ploy. But he still shows his anger toward Orichmaru.
Weapons: Windmill Shuriken, Fists, Sound
Jutsu:
Acdemy and Basic Justus's
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
The user assumes the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu.
Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
A high-speed movement technique. It is described as 'appearing with the wind and disappearing like the wind.' A very basic jutsu, it appears that most shinobi above Genin-rank know it.
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack.
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
This technique creates a clone of the user, but it is an illusion, not a real copy like the Shadow Clone Technique. The illusions will dissipate when they come into contact with anything. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan.
Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape Technique)
A basic technique taught at the Ninja academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill)
This Jutsu allows the user to travel underground, and come back up (or pull others under) whenever he/she likes.
Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
This allows the user to set off exploding tags from a distance with Chakra.
Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.
Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing)
Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra, and it also teaches them how to run up trees and walk up walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are said to be the hardest location to learn how to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will be able to have any jutsu available to him (theoretically) because she can focus chakra as needed. Next the chakra released must be properly controlled.
Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking)
A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of charka out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Advanced Jutsus
Katon: Gkaky no Jutsu
Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is exhaled from the user's mouth. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique, they are recognized as an adult.
Katon: H'senka no Jutsu
This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Katon: Ry'ka no Jutsu
The user breathes fire along a length of cord, guide wire, or other long thin object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Clan Jutsu
katsujinken Jutsu ( Life Taking Sword Jutsu)
The users condese the sound waves into a physical blade with his chakra and when it strikes the opponent it does sub-dual damage instead of external, it will take down an opponent from the inside. Zaki can summon a giant naginata, most can only summon a tsurugi.
kiai Jutsu ( Spirit Shout Jutsu)
The user shouts and uses there chakra to enhance the sound-waves making them stronger and directing them to a destination of choice with the chakra. This jutsu can level ground quickly with enough chakra.
koubou itchi ( Attack and Defense are one)
The user is able to send the sound-waves around him using his chakra either to do an outburst wave creating a shield, also making it an attack of defense.
Kekkei Genkai/Bloodlimit/Special Abilities: Advance Intellegence and Clan Jutsus
Battle Style: Zaki is the leader of the band of Seven, so he believes he has to be the strongest, so hes turned the weakness of the clan into a strength more or less, he wears Armour and uses heavy weights to increase his strength.
But in battle he relies on smarts over his physical strength, he often keeps a good distance between him and his opponent so he can plan out how hes going to defeat him. Zaki then implements a move to start his plan in action.
He uses his Justus that correspond with his opponents movements, because of his advance hearing he often place is jutus on his mark nearly never missing his target. But even when in times of dire need, he'll use his taijutusu and his speed to pumble the opponent, hopefully his Armour is enough to withstand the furious blows of his opponent.
Companions: 6 Remaining Clan Members...
History: Zaki was born in the war-zone on the edge of the Land of Sound, where War was everyday, and the threat of dieing was imminent, and every corner your turn you look back and feel paranoid. But as a mere child, he didn't know the emotion of fear, and became easily attuned to the War-like surrounding.
His mother died when he was the age of four, the only other person he knew was Akira, a Friend, also one of the remaining seven. Zaki and Akira always played toghter, hiding, and playing ninja all the time until 9 months later. When a Sound Nomad saw the two and the unique tattoo only on those of the Forbidden Clan.
Zaki and Akira knew allot about fighting from watching the war, but had never been in an actual battle with anyone. The man underestimated there ages and it ended up being his downfall as he died as merciless death. Zaki's powers had awoken, when his best friend was near death. Zaki went back to the village with Akira to discover a land he never saw before.
Zaki had seen the turmoil before, but this level of it was sick, suddenly a name came into his mind that his mother told him of, "Maru". He walked into the bloodstained house to find a ripped up house, dust collecting on the shelves, the floor creaking with every-step, the chairs broken, even the bookshelf was a mess.
Something was seriously wrong and Zaki knew it, he went through some of the rubble but found nothing to much significant, his analytical senses had hi on the edge, he knew his great grand father had been betrayed, this was no ordinary mess.
Zaki's interest in books sparked again, as he dusted off a journal of Maru, Zaki grabbed Akira attention as they read the scarred book. They soon realized the power of there bloodline and the horror that followed. Zaki ran out of the house, tear on his face slowly dripping onto the empty streets. Zaki was afraid, he was 5 and he got himself into an affair way deeper than anything, and it's all because of his blood.
Akira walked out with books about Ninjutsu, and skills he possessed as of other skills they possessed, and at the age of 6 he mastered them all, as Akira mastered Nyomi's style of fighting. They realized to hide there past and bloodline, and Zaki wore a suit of Armour with a sash like a dark knight, and Akira a pink one.
The two passed the academy with ease, there knowledge was beyond anyone in their class but they held back and stayed in the top 10 of there class. By luck they we're assigned in the same squad with Kuro, his Sensei was Waya.
Zaki traveled through the land of Sound, aiding his Sensei in whatever Orichmaru's orders were, when ever he heard that name is bitterness grew stronger and stronger. The hatred began to show not just for him but anyone near him
On one mission that anger raged out of control and Zaki summoned his sound blade, and imploded all the organs inside of the opposing Mercuries and ninja's , he was becoming feared by his opponents and his team, Zaki was growing further apart from Akira and his friend's, his anger began to make his movements.
The Chunnin Exams were to take place and Waya put up all three he was confident in there skills because of there smarts and combat sense. Zaki went through the First Exam easily as did Akira since it was a knowledge test, Zaki was going to show the Kage skill so he could get close to him and continue on his plan to kill him.
Zaki, Akira, and Kuro passed the second exam, which was a team battle Royal, it was different than the "Forest of Death" the nation has, this was a matter of who's left standing. Zaki naturally took this opportunity to release some of his anger.
The third exam was one of the harshest exams, it was a to the death fight tournament, his team had made it, and according to the rules he had to make it to the top. Zaki wouldn't risk his plot of revenge for his friends. Luckily Zaki's friends wouldn't fight him and surrendered before the match begun. Zaki made it to the finals, it was him versus the Star Ninja of Stone, Domin, zaki had seen his previous moves and he was something to wreck-en with,
The fight began, Zaki planned the way he'd win, more than twice, think of more ways as they moved slowly closer, for he was no ordinary ninja, Domin made the first move by using an Earth Jutsu sending earth spikes into the air. Zaki dodged them with his speed, but only to be hit by the second wave, injuring him badly, but Zaki wouldn't let him get away.
Zaki was anxious to drag this fight out, Zaki merely casted Fireballs only to have him block them with massive walls of Earth. Only one plan was left, to use his Clan's Jutsu the Sound Blade. Zaki focused his chakra in his palm as it began to take shape as a normal blade, but Zaki went overboard sending even More chakra as the blade grew and grew and before anyone knew it, it was a giant Halberd.
Zaki swung the massive blade when Domin attempted to block with an jutsu but the shere force of the blade shattered the earth and kept its course until it collided and went through Domin. Zaki watched as the ninja stuttered, and dropped to the ground Medical Ninja dashing for him. Zaki had crushed his rib cage and many bones with the one swipe, but Zaki was exhausted as well but didn't show it.
He valor-ed enough to get Lord Orchimaru's attention, and now seeks to join him and finally put his plot for revenge in action. his friends follow, not for Revenge but to stop Zaki. When zaki returned to Sound people shunned him, they learned that he possessed the bloodline of the traitors so long ago, only they knew it was a lie, with Society against them, will they succeeded in there goal of killing Orchimaru.
RP Example: The darkness of the night shrouded Zaki even more for his outfit aided him in the night, for he was invisible and could hide in anyones shadow. The wind howled in the night sky a normal sound for those who live in the Sound Village, the trees looked like giant walls swaying back and forth and the forest ever so alluring and dangerous, only the strong went out in the night, for the fear of Renegade Ninja's and dangerous creatures. Zaki merely blew of this feeling of fear, it was replaced by hate, as he saw blood scored all over the street. ' He's the Kage and he allows all this suffering from these lies' Zaki gloomed over the pile of red.
" What are you doing in the streets so late, its not like your patrolling" a girls voice echoed from the shadows around him. " I may say the same for you" Zaki smirked pointing at Akira. " Your no fun anymore" Akira stuck out her tongue. Zaki turned away from Akira. " Because I'm trying to make something of my life, I'm going to avenge our parents" Zaki placed his arm on his shoulder where his curse mark lay-ed, the mark of there family, the bond they shared, the cursed bond.
Akira looked down upon the UN settled street, " Why are you so obsessed with getting Revenge, why dint you work toward your own goal, he'll kill you" Akira walked closer to Zaki as tears began to flow across her gentle face. " I'm sorry Akira, but i must" Zaki said turning to look at her face that was full of tears for him. " I'm going to set us free" Zaki said confidently walking away, Akira dropped down to her knees. A tear dropped down his emotionless face, ' You've helped me enough, stay back, if anyone will die it will be me' Zaki thought as the wind blew stronger.
Name: Zaki Kariukage
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Village: Village Hidden in Sound/ Transfrered to Leaf
Rank: Chunnin
Clan: Oroborous
Clothing or Armor: Zaki is cursed and blessed with his bloodline, and has realized its potential and flaws. Zaki is vested in a black cloak that shrouds him from the world that hates him for his unique talent. Under this cloak lies a small obsidian chest plate, it has two black straps connection the Armour to him.
He also black muscle shirt below that, this Armour is made of lightened aluminum allowing the maximum amount of defense with the least amount of weight. Zaki knows off his weakness and is determined to make it a strength like his father before him. So he laced two adamant weights to his wrists and his legs, this amount of strain would cause anyone to collapse. Zaki wears a pair of baggy black pants with several pockets, were he lined with holster material making his pockets into intend holders for his weapons and scrolls.
Besides his basic clothing, he wears a another set of Armour above his lightened Armour, this Armour is made of harnded steel alloy, allowing more defense again with lighter weight, he has two gauntlets that are laced with hide of the wolves on the Great Marchuki Moutain, his Gauntlets have seals placed upon them for they were once owned by a master swordsmen. He has this set of Armour covering his knees and feet as well.
Physical Appearance: Zaki has white hair, as white as a ghost, its , it stands tall and spiked into the air. His hair is held back by a a bandage headband and then by his headband that is scared fro training roughly.
Zaki has white eyes, and for what reason, no one knows, hes not blind, his eyes have always added to his frightful dark presence he emits. He has no pupils it just a mass of white similar to those who are using the Byuugan.
Zaki stands at 5 foot 4 inches and weighing in at 115 pounds. He looks like a child, most people think hes at least two years younger than he says he is, this is only but a mere annoyance to Zaki.
Zaki physical outlook doesn't fit his smart personality well, but in all his smaller body has helped him in fight and dodge his opponents attacks. Everything is how it is for a reason good or bad.
Personality: Zaki is the most stoic and timid of all of the last of the Clan Members. Zaki is a smart young man with a dark attitude. Hes not your average brooding loner, hes more or less the Brooding Avenger, with a ploy of a Satisfied Solider.
Near Orichmaru he shows that he wants blood to be spilled of everyone who opposes his kage, but in truth he wants only to spill the blood of the kage, but to do this he must wait till the time is right. His view upon th Sound Nation is skewed and scorn, since of the hatred he received as a child bearing the blood of the clan.
His hatred mainly lies in the Sound Village leader, he can forgive the villages believing the lies he told them. He looks upon the world in two views, Revenge and Knowledge.
When not acting in front of the Kage, he acts more or less like a normal human being, he always has his face in a book or is training, hes more gentle and calm around others then his blood-lusting ploy. But he still shows his anger toward Orichmaru.
Weapons: Windmill Shuriken, Fists, Sound
Jutsu:
Acdemy and Basic Justus's
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
The user assumes the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu.
Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
A high-speed movement technique. It is described as 'appearing with the wind and disappearing like the wind.' A very basic jutsu, it appears that most shinobi above Genin-rank know it.
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack.
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
This technique creates a clone of the user, but it is an illusion, not a real copy like the Shadow Clone Technique. The illusions will dissipate when they come into contact with anything. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan.
Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape Technique)
A basic technique taught at the Ninja academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill)
This Jutsu allows the user to travel underground, and come back up (or pull others under) whenever he/she likes.
Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
This allows the user to set off exploding tags from a distance with Chakra.
Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.
Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing)
Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra, and it also teaches them how to run up trees and walk up walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are said to be the hardest location to learn how to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will be able to have any jutsu available to him (theoretically) because she can focus chakra as needed. Next the chakra released must be properly controlled.
Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking)
A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of charka out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Advanced Jutsus
Katon: Gkaky no Jutsu
Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is exhaled from the user's mouth. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique, they are recognized as an adult.
Katon: H'senka no Jutsu
This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Katon: Ry'ka no Jutsu
The user breathes fire along a length of cord, guide wire, or other long thin object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Clan Jutsu
katsujinken Jutsu ( Life Taking Sword Jutsu)
The users condese the sound waves into a physical blade with his chakra and when it strikes the opponent it does sub-dual damage instead of external, it will take down an opponent from the inside. Zaki can summon a giant naginata, most can only summon a tsurugi.
kiai Jutsu ( Spirit Shout Jutsu)
The user shouts and uses there chakra to enhance the sound-waves making them stronger and directing them to a destination of choice with the chakra. This jutsu can level ground quickly with enough chakra.
koubou itchi ( Attack and Defense are one)
The user is able to send the sound-waves around him using his chakra either to do an outburst wave creating a shield, also making it an attack of defense.
Kekkei Genkai/Bloodlimit/Special Abilities: Advance Intellegence and Clan Jutsus
Battle Style: Zaki is the leader of the band of Seven, so he believes he has to be the strongest, so hes turned the weakness of the clan into a strength more or less, he wears Armour and uses heavy weights to increase his strength.
But in battle he relies on smarts over his physical strength, he often keeps a good distance between him and his opponent so he can plan out how hes going to defeat him. Zaki then implements a move to start his plan in action.
He uses his Justus that correspond with his opponents movements, because of his advance hearing he often place is jutus on his mark nearly never missing his target. But even when in times of dire need, he'll use his taijutusu and his speed to pumble the opponent, hopefully his Armour is enough to withstand the furious blows of his opponent.
Companions: 6 Remaining Clan Members...
History: Zaki was born in the war-zone on the edge of the Land of Sound, where War was everyday, and the threat of dieing was imminent, and every corner your turn you look back and feel paranoid. But as a mere child, he didn't know the emotion of fear, and became easily attuned to the War-like surrounding.
His mother died when he was the age of four, the only other person he knew was Akira, a Friend, also one of the remaining seven. Zaki and Akira always played toghter, hiding, and playing ninja all the time until 9 months later. When a Sound Nomad saw the two and the unique tattoo only on those of the Forbidden Clan.
Zaki and Akira knew allot about fighting from watching the war, but had never been in an actual battle with anyone. The man underestimated there ages and it ended up being his downfall as he died as merciless death. Zaki's powers had awoken, when his best friend was near death. Zaki went back to the village with Akira to discover a land he never saw before.
Zaki had seen the turmoil before, but this level of it was sick, suddenly a name came into his mind that his mother told him of, "Maru". He walked into the bloodstained house to find a ripped up house, dust collecting on the shelves, the floor creaking with every-step, the chairs broken, even the bookshelf was a mess.
Something was seriously wrong and Zaki knew it, he went through some of the rubble but found nothing to much significant, his analytical senses had hi on the edge, he knew his great grand father had been betrayed, this was no ordinary mess.
Zaki's interest in books sparked again, as he dusted off a journal of Maru, Zaki grabbed Akira attention as they read the scarred book. They soon realized the power of there bloodline and the horror that followed. Zaki ran out of the house, tear on his face slowly dripping onto the empty streets. Zaki was afraid, he was 5 and he got himself into an affair way deeper than anything, and it's all because of his blood.
Akira walked out with books about Ninjutsu, and skills he possessed as of other skills they possessed, and at the age of 6 he mastered them all, as Akira mastered Nyomi's style of fighting. They realized to hide there past and bloodline, and Zaki wore a suit of Armour with a sash like a dark knight, and Akira a pink one.
The two passed the academy with ease, there knowledge was beyond anyone in their class but they held back and stayed in the top 10 of there class. By luck they we're assigned in the same squad with Kuro, his Sensei was Waya.
Zaki traveled through the land of Sound, aiding his Sensei in whatever Orichmaru's orders were, when ever he heard that name is bitterness grew stronger and stronger. The hatred began to show not just for him but anyone near him
On one mission that anger raged out of control and Zaki summoned his sound blade, and imploded all the organs inside of the opposing Mercuries and ninja's , he was becoming feared by his opponents and his team, Zaki was growing further apart from Akira and his friend's, his anger began to make his movements.
The Chunnin Exams were to take place and Waya put up all three he was confident in there skills because of there smarts and combat sense. Zaki went through the First Exam easily as did Akira since it was a knowledge test, Zaki was going to show the Kage skill so he could get close to him and continue on his plan to kill him.
Zaki, Akira, and Kuro passed the second exam, which was a team battle Royal, it was different than the "Forest of Death" the nation has, this was a matter of who's left standing. Zaki naturally took this opportunity to release some of his anger.
The third exam was one of the harshest exams, it was a to the death fight tournament, his team had made it, and according to the rules he had to make it to the top. Zaki wouldn't risk his plot of revenge for his friends. Luckily Zaki's friends wouldn't fight him and surrendered before the match begun. Zaki made it to the finals, it was him versus the Star Ninja of Stone, Domin, zaki had seen his previous moves and he was something to wreck-en with,
The fight began, Zaki planned the way he'd win, more than twice, think of more ways as they moved slowly closer, for he was no ordinary ninja, Domin made the first move by using an Earth Jutsu sending earth spikes into the air. Zaki dodged them with his speed, but only to be hit by the second wave, injuring him badly, but Zaki wouldn't let him get away.
Zaki was anxious to drag this fight out, Zaki merely casted Fireballs only to have him block them with massive walls of Earth. Only one plan was left, to use his Clan's Jutsu the Sound Blade. Zaki focused his chakra in his palm as it began to take shape as a normal blade, but Zaki went overboard sending even More chakra as the blade grew and grew and before anyone knew it, it was a giant Halberd.
Zaki swung the massive blade when Domin attempted to block with an jutsu but the shere force of the blade shattered the earth and kept its course until it collided and went through Domin. Zaki watched as the ninja stuttered, and dropped to the ground Medical Ninja dashing for him. Zaki had crushed his rib cage and many bones with the one swipe, but Zaki was exhausted as well but didn't show it.
He valor-ed enough to get Lord Orchimaru's attention, and now seeks to join him and finally put his plot for revenge in action. his friends follow, not for Revenge but to stop Zaki. When zaki returned to Sound people shunned him, they learned that he possessed the bloodline of the traitors so long ago, only they knew it was a lie, with Society against them, will they succeeded in there goal of killing Orchimaru.
RP Example: The darkness of the night shrouded Zaki even more for his outfit aided him in the night, for he was invisible and could hide in anyones shadow. The wind howled in the night sky a normal sound for those who live in the Sound Village, the trees looked like giant walls swaying back and forth and the forest ever so alluring and dangerous, only the strong went out in the night, for the fear of Renegade Ninja's and dangerous creatures. Zaki merely blew of this feeling of fear, it was replaced by hate, as he saw blood scored all over the street. ' He's the Kage and he allows all this suffering from these lies' Zaki gloomed over the pile of red.
" What are you doing in the streets so late, its not like your patrolling" a girls voice echoed from the shadows around him. " I may say the same for you" Zaki smirked pointing at Akira. " Your no fun anymore" Akira stuck out her tongue. Zaki turned away from Akira. " Because I'm trying to make something of my life, I'm going to avenge our parents" Zaki placed his arm on his shoulder where his curse mark lay-ed, the mark of there family, the bond they shared, the cursed bond.
Akira looked down upon the UN settled street, " Why are you so obsessed with getting Revenge, why dint you work toward your own goal, he'll kill you" Akira walked closer to Zaki as tears began to flow across her gentle face. " I'm sorry Akira, but i must" Zaki said turning to look at her face that was full of tears for him. " I'm going to set us free" Zaki said confidently walking away, Akira dropped down to her knees. A tear dropped down his emotionless face, ' You've helped me enough, stay back, if anyone will die it will be me' Zaki thought as the wind blew stronger.
